The Vipers? I’m going to make them regret the day they took me. They can own my body, but they will never have my heart. They want everything I am, everything I have to give, and won’t stop until they get just that. Their scarred, blood-stained hands holding me tight. The old man ran up a debt with them and then sold me to cover his losses. They are not people you mess with, yet my dad did. Their deals are as sordid as their business, and their reputation is enough to bring a grown man to his knees, forcing him to beg for mercy. Moral of the story.enter with caution.Ryder, Garrett, Kenzo, and Diesel-The Vipers. But that's just me, and I see things differently than other people. I worry that this can rouse disappointment. Here you have 4 human men who are having sex with the same woman 4-5 times a day and/or back to back. I think it can personally put a lot of pressure on men do live up to these expectations. It's my personal opinion that if someone were to become too heavily invested in novels like these, I can see how this can be difficult for marriages/relationships. Kenzo is the only one that seems to be "normal" and easily the most relatable but most of her time is spent in Diesel's dungeon. This could be because he was my personal favorite, but she is with Diesel a lot. Roxy spends too much time with Diesel and not enough time with Kenzo. After I got past the main arc of the storyline, I was skipping paragraphs and pages to get to the end. I think it would have at least kept the story interesting. I kind of wish one of them would have died. This whole 4-man romance is hard to relate to and it takes away from the genuine love they feel for one another. This is just a personal preference, but I really wish she would have just picked one guy and stuck with it. It doesn't take long before her lines are cheesy and unrealistic. I'm talking, stabbing each other, cutting each other, licking blood, torture porn-like sex with each page turn. It goes above and beyond the level of 50 Shades and the Dom/Sub kind of lifestyle. Sex with these guys is violent at all times, especially with Diesel. I have never left a book wishing more for a slow, romantic, intimate evening in my life. The entire book takes place over a 6-7 month time period. We have all fallen in love, screwed in every position, in every room, broken down walls that have been built up for years in a person.in one week. You get almost halfway through the book when you find out that all of this has taken place in one week. It makes the characters seem less relatable than they already are.
Near the end there's a slight rise in plotline that makes it sort of interesting, but it is incredibly short lived.
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